🎥How Twitter Ruined A Life - The Patrick Tomlinson Saga (Part 1)

[Turry Fawks]

Ok literal, @Boberry!

whaaaaat? Come on you guys!

 

[Coonskin]

Boring wishy washy approach imo and won't attract normies. Not sure who this is for

 

[CQ Beans]

You know what, I really hated that you picked the dramatic tryhard AI voice at first but I laughed out loud when it went into the whole cat account thing. Guaranteed this will be funnier than Porsalin’s over engineered shit pile

 

[CQ Beans]

Boring wishy washy approach imo and won't attract normies. Not sure who this is for

The well intoned introduction will absolutely attract normies. They’ll be well poised for a true victim status sob story. The juxtaposition between the narrator’s seriousness and reality will be all outsider’s need. Thanks for nothing, Adam.

Just a reminder: Jim Norton,’ I fucked one (drunk woman) on a table’

 

[damitjenkins20cars]

Might I suggest some of his classic responses? “You did not fart in my wife’s vagina, child.” is good but there are literally tons of others.

"Your father doesn't have a penis that's why he had daughters" I'm paraphrasing

 

[Daddy Warbucks]

Boring wishy washy approach imo and won't attract normies. Not sure who this is for

I felt this way too but it's too late now

 

[Stent]

How Twitter addiction ruined a man's entire life

Even your title takes too long. And you missed the apostrophe like a complete asshole.

 

[Prison Enjoyer]

A lot of potential here. Good to see someone competent putting the work in. TYFYS.

Main advice (building on others): Make a separate video to your multi-part series with an introduction of who Pat is and what is Patposting - your HOOK. Just a 3-5 min video to pin to your channel that’s easily shareable to people who have never heard of Pat or O&A.

Others have emphasized this but presuming this is the first instalment of a many-part detailed series, you really need to hook normies and give them a reason to care. Once they care, and only then, will any of them watch your detailed documentary.

Call it something like “Enjoy Prison, Stlaker | The most trolled man on Earth” or similar, not just “who is Pat Tomlinson”. Do you watch YouTube recommended documentaries about names you’ve never heard of? No.
Hook people, introduce Pat and Patposting, then shill your documentary at the end and pin it.

Best of luck with everything, brotherman

 

[Daddy Warbucks]

How Twitter addiction ruined a man's entire life

Even your title takes too long. And you missed the apostrophe like a complete asshole.

fawwk

 

[Daddy Warbucks]

Does anyone happen to know when Patrick said "we cant afford it" regarding the lawsuit

 

[DeadWithoutMyDavid]

Nice paraphrasing my comment from the other day about the Robert Mewler account, stupid.

 

[SpaceEdge]

Does anyone happen to know when Patrick said "we cant afford it" regarding the lawsuit

It was in a longer text thread where he was convinced the texter was some lady. It's at the very end of it all. I don't have it, you're welcome

 

[wbgreen]

Start off with video and audio of the cops at Pat's hovel. That's when he looks the most unhinged. Then add him screaming when he realized what he thought was a HuffPo reporter was a troll.

Right off the bat it tells normies what a fucking retard Pat is. It's the best way to hook them in.

Then tell Pat's tale from the beginning.

 

[WifeStoreWill]

It was in a longer text thread where he was convinced the texter was some lady. It's at the very end of it all. I don't have it, you're welcome

 

[WifeStoreWill]

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Also, this:

 

[Coonskin]

Does anyone happen to know when Patrick said "we cant afford it" regarding the lawsuit

When he texted a redditor pretending to be the author of The Color Purple

 

[guest]

last Thursday night, around 1 am, was when this was all conceptualized between me and my friend, over a couple lines of blow. By the next morning episode one was nearly complete.

Gotta love that American can-do attitude. Porsalin had to wait for his dole money and several parliamentary committees to sign his permission slips. He's still waiting on a couple it seems

 

[damitjenkins20cars]

Also, this:

You gotta post the fart version

 

[fricklefrackle]

You gotta post the fart version

 

[Honoria]

Maybe don't put "Part 2" in the title of the next one so people can feel like they can watch it by itself. Might help get more eyes on it. Also call it "Da Beer Show".

I like that Porsalin conducted multiple interviews and they've been sitting on his hard drive for almost a year. Javier got a whole series done in a couple of months while also working on other episodes not involving Pat.