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Help me out here - I just tried changing words around for an hour because it keeps getting flagged, then I took the first verse off completely and it took. I know they won't put it to "Me and Julio" but I wanted to hear what they'd do with Folk Rock.
[Start]
[Intro]
[Verse]
She took him home from the bar
said his name was Lamar
and that he played ball for the Ravens
When the fellow got hard
he said when do we start
and the juices just flooded her basement
[Verse]
It's big and black
He knows how to put it in
Pat eats the gak
and sniffs the stains on his underwear
Call the brigade in!
Bring a mop and a bucket.
[Chorus}
Someone tell them there's a clean-up on aisle Black.
Someone tell them there's a clean-up on aisle black.
[Verse]
Whoa(Whoa), It didn't take long it was such big dong
and Pat's wife, she began to leak
When Lamar was released
Pat began to feast
and they planned to do it all again next week.
[Verse]
He's big and black
He knows how to put it in
Pat eats the gak
and sniffs the stains on his underwear
Call the brigade in!
Bring a mop and a bucket.
[Chorus]
Someone tell him there's a clean-up on aisle Black.
Someone tell them there's a clean-up on aisle black.
[Outro]
[End]
What is it about that first verse? I changed the team name to nonsense, i changed "hard" WTF? The rest is fine?
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[Start]
[Intro]
[Verse]
She took him home from the bar
said his name was Lamar
and that he played ball for the Ravens
When the fellow got hard
he said when do we start
and the juices just flooded her basement
[Verse]
It's big and black
He knows how to put it in
Pat eats the gak
and sniffs the stains on his underwear
Call the brigade in!
Bring a mop and a bucket.
[Chorus}
Someone tell them there's a clean-up on aisle Black.
Someone tell them there's a clean-up on aisle black.
[Verse]
Whoa(Whoa), It didn't take long it was such big dong
and Pat's wife, she began to leak
When Lamar was released
Pat began to feast
and they planned to do it all again next week.
[Verse]
He's big and black
He knows how to put it in
Pat eats the gak
and sniffs the stains on his underwear
Call the brigade in!
Bring a mop and a bucket.
[Chorus]
Someone tell him there's a clean-up on aisle Black.
Someone tell them there's a clean-up on aisle black.
[Outro]
[End]
What is it about that first verse? I changed the team name to nonsense, i changed "hard" WTF? The rest is fine?
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