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Thinking of writing my own TV show part 2... (audio)

LockedHDD__Pot

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I preferred the other guy's idea but I did listen to your complete pitch & it could work if you lay it out in the exact order you said it, & when you punctuate those edgy words consider that a reveal / scene change. Make me a 20mins pilot.

... as I was writing this I realised it could be funny to have a Glee / wholesome-style teen kidcom with a loff track, but the dialogue is abhorrent (but audience loffs anyway). So thanks for that, I've written it down
 

CumiaPoodle

Brazil sent me a wife with a dick ☺️
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This was Pats first pitch when he was a classic conservative
 
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@Nigger Jim will be playing one of the faggots(He has admitted to using grinder for blowjobs and boy butt).

@Child. Will play Adolf.

@LingerLonger will play the jew class present.

@Weasel will play the controversial male to female transgender that wants to be the school's first tranny cheerleader.

@Minaw Will head up the school newspaper of which 3 quarters will just be his movie and video game reviews

@Torquie will be the school drug dealer that uses more than he sells.

@Snake Will be the schools 5ft 3 wrestling champion that was sporting a comb over by age 15. He's upset that no one knows or cares that he won state, yet they suck Adolfs balls for throwing a few touchdowns. He believes himself to be the superior athlete and more deserving of praise and bitches, so he's jealous of Adolf and plots to ruin his life.

@Stent will be the witty class clown that is currently friend zoned by no less than 6 hot babe's

@Ricci Ryda is currently trying to navigate his developing sexuality and will be one of the faggots doing the raping.
 
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@Nigger Jim will be playing one of the faggots(He has admitted to using grinder for blowjobs and boy butt).

@Child. Will play Adolf.

@LingerLonger will play the jew class present.

@Weasel will play the controversial male to female transgender that wants to be the school's first tranny cheerleader.

@Minaw Will head up the school newspaper of which 3 quarters will just be his movie and video game reviews

@Torquie will be the school drug dealer that uses more than he sells.

@Snake Will be the schools 5ft 3 wrestling champion that was sporting a comb over by age 15. He's upset that no one knows or cares that he won state, yet they suck Adolfs balls for throwing a few touchdowns. He believes himself to be the superior athlete and more deserving of praise and bitches, so he's jealous of Adolf and plots to ruin his life.

@Stent will be the witty class clown that is currently friend zoned by no less than 6 hot babies.

@Ricci Ryda is currently trying to navigate his developing sexuality and will be one of the faggots doing the raping.

“controversial male to female transgender that wants to be the school's first tranny cheerleader.”

This could be my Academy Award winning role. I’m all fawking in!
 
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“controversial male to female transgender that wants to be the school's first tranny cheerleader.”

This could be my Academy Award winning role. I’m all fawking in!
You have posted one too many tranny gifs here, so I couldn't think of anyone better suited for the role, and I'm over the moon to know that we have you locked in! Though I'll still need you to take a seat on that casting couch to "Audition".
 

Lamont & Tonelli

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You got my interest with the elevator pitch. Thinking miniseries or standard 22-26 episode TV season? What about distribution? Where you gonna film? Please don't say Vancouver.
 
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@Nigger Jim will be playing one of the faggots(He has admitted to using grinder for blowjobs and boy butt).

@Child. Will play Adolf.

@LingerLonger will play the jew class present.

@Weasel will play the controversial male to female transgender that wants to be the school's first tranny cheerleader.

@Minaw Will head up the school newspaper of which 3 quarters will just be his movie and video game reviews

@Torquie will be the school drug dealer that uses more than he sells.

@Snake Will be the schools 5ft 3 wrestling champion that was sporting a comb over by age 15. He's upset that no one knows or cares that he won state, yet they suck Adolfs balls for throwing a few touchdowns. He believes himself to be the superior athlete and more deserving of praise and bitches, so he's jealous of Adolf and plots to ruin his life.

@Stent will be the witty class clown that is currently friend zoned by no less than 6 hot babe's

@Ricci Ryda is currently trying to navigate his developing sexuality and will be one of the faggots doing the raping.
"@Child. Will play Adolf."


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